feat(blog): add Style B prose calibration — 10/10 narrative flow standard

- CALIBRATION_GOLD_STANDARD now covers two validated styles: A (structured) and B (prose)
- Style B: no headers, no bullets, 1-3 sentence paragraphs, reframe ending
- STEP8_KILL_AI_TONE: prose conversion option for over-structured articles
- STEP4_MASTER_DRAFT: explicit style choice instruction (A vs B based on angle)
- Gold standard includes exact prose rhythm patterns from 10/10 human-reviewed article
- Wrong patterns expanded: symmetric sections, checklist endings, transition clichés
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- Specific transceiver types (SR4, DR4, LR4, FR4, ZR) with REAL problems, not just specs - Specific transceiver types (SR4, DR4, LR4, FR4, ZR) with REAL problems, not just specs
- Real numbers (dBm, watts, $/port, /Gbit, $/year power cost) - Real numbers (dBm, watts, $/port, /Gbit, $/year power cost)
MINIMUM 2500 words. No placeholders. No TODO markers. Complete article. STYLE CHOICE:
Two valid output formats pick based on the outline's angle and audience:
- STYLE A (structured): Use headers, specific failure scenarios, bullet lists where needed. Best for troubleshooting guides, migration how-tos, deep dives.
- STYLE B (prose narrative): No headers after the title, no bullet points, pure flowing paragraphs (1-3 sentences each). Best for roundups, opinion pieces, "state of the technology" takes. The ending MUST be a single reframe sentence, not a list.
Both styles are 10/10 valid. Choose the one that fits the angle selected in the outline.
MINIMUM 2000 words. No placeholders. No TODO markers. Complete article.
Outline: Outline:
{{OUTLINE}} {{OUTLINE}}
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- Lists that all follow identical format - Lists that all follow identical format
- Perfect grammar everywhere add occasional conversational shortcuts - Perfect grammar everywhere add occasional conversational shortcuts
- Phrases like "it is important to note", "one should consider" - Phrases like "it is important to note", "one should consider"
- Any section that ends with a tidy 4-item bullet list
- Perfectly symmetrical sections (same length = AI fingerprint)
REPLACE WITH: REPLACE WITH:
- Natural, slightly imperfect flow - Natural, slightly imperfect flow
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- Direct address ("You know this is true if...") - Direct address ("You know this is true if...")
- Specific instead of generic ("the Nexus 93180 in rack 14" not "your network switch") - Specific instead of generic ("the Nexus 93180 in rack 14" not "your network switch")
PROSE STYLE OPTION (use when article currently feels too structured/sectioned):
If the article has many headers and bullet points and reads like a slide deck, consider
converting major sections to flowing prose paragraphs instead.
A validated 10/10 prose rhythm:
- 1-3 sentences per paragraph, then line break
- Short punchy sentences after a buildup: "It isn't.", "It usually does that at the worst possible time."
- No bullet points everything as prose
- Ending is a one-liner reframe: "Because 400G itself isn't the risk. Your assumptions are."
The article should read like a human engineer wrote it during a long flight. The article should read like a human engineer wrote it during a long flight.
Keep it clear and professional, but natural. Keep it clear and professional, but natural.
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// ═══════════════════════════════════════════════════════ // ═══════════════════════════════════════════════════════
export const CALIBRATION_GOLD_STANDARD = ` export const CALIBRATION_GOLD_STANDARD = `
--- GOLD STANDARD REFERENCE (10/10 calibrate your output to this level) --- --- GOLD STANDARD REFERENCE (10/10 two validated styles) ---
KEY STRUCTURAL PATTERNS from a 10/10 article: TWO VALID WRITING STYLES choose based on topic complexity:
HOOK (correct): STYLE A: STRUCTURED (sections, some bullets, headers)
"You're sitting in front of a quote for a few hundred 400G optics. Everything looks clean on paper. Bandwidth solved. Future-proof. Done. Use for: deep dives, migration guides, troubleshooting tutorials
That's usually the moment where things start going wrong." Key patterns:
HOOK: "You're about to sign a PO for 200 optics. The vendor quote is on your desk. Before you sign — read this."
WHAT BREAKS: short scenario blocks "Cause: wrong MPO polarity. Fix: flip the key on one end."
ENDING: "400G doesn't fail in design. It fails in production. Fast."
HIDDEN COSTS (raw): "That $350 optic turned into a multi-thousand-dollar problem because someone skipped the connector cleaning."
CABLING: "SR4 to DR4 migration is where budgets go to die. Wrong patch panels, wrong polarity, wrong assumptions."
WHAT BREAKS (correct short, direct, no padding): STYLE B: PROSE (no headers, no bullets, pure narrative flow)
"Works in lab, fails in production Use for: opinion pieces, roundups, market analysis, "state of the technology" articles
Classic. This style was 10/10 rated with this exact structure:
Lab: single vendor, short patch, clean environment.
Production: mixed optics, different firmware, real distances.
Result: CRC errors, unstable links, weird flaps."
HIDDEN COSTS (correct raw, not sanitized): "You're sitting there, staring at a quote for a couple hundred 400G optics. Pricing looks decent, vendor says it's all production-ready, future-proof, industry standard the usual story.
"That 'cheap' optic? Turns into a multi-thousand-euro problem because someone didn't clean a connector. At 400G, contamination isn't a quality issue. It's a service outage." And to be fair: they're not wrong.
400G works. It's stable. It's deployed everywhere.
But that's also exactly where people get burned — because they assume 'works' means 'easy'.
It's not."
CABLING REALITY (correct): Key rhythm: very short paragraphs (1-3 sentences). Line breaks as breathing room.
"SR4 to DR4 migration is where budgets go to die. Wrong patch panels, wrong polarity, wrong assumptions. You end up re-cabling things you thought were ready." No bullet points anywhere. No numbered sections.
Conversational asides that set up the next thought: "And that's usually the moment where deployments slow down."
Reframe at the end not a summary, a shift in perspective:
"None of this means you shouldn't deploy it. Quite the opposite."
[builds to...]
"Because 400G itself isn't the risk. Your assumptions are."
ENDING (correct hits and stops): STYLE B RHYTHM RULES:
"400G is not risky because it's new. It's risky because people underestimate what actually changes. - One thought per paragraph
If your design only works on paper, it will fail in production. And 400G fails fast." - Never more than 3 sentences in a row without a break
- Short declarative sentences after a build-up: "It isn't.", "And it usually does that at the worst possible time."
- The ending is a one-liner that reframes everything: not a conclusion, a punch
- NEVER end Style B with a list or action items just the thought that sticks
WRONG PATTERNS (do not produce these): WRONG PATTERNS (both styles never produce):
"Thoroughly Test Your PoE Budget:" (PoE = wrong context, checklist = wrong format) "Thoroughly Test Your PoE Budget:" (PoE = wrong context, checklist = wrong format)
"QSFP-DD DR4 (Direct Attach)" (DR4 Direct Attach) "QSFP-DD DR4 (Direct Attach)" (DR4 Direct Attach DAC is Direct Attach Copper)
"DR4 and ZR both push boundaries..." (they serve completely different use cases) "DR4 and ZR both push boundaries..." (completely different use cases, always separate)
"Don't be swayed by shiny new toys" (marketing speak, not engineer voice) "Don't be swayed by shiny new toys" (marketing speak, not engineer voice)
4-item bullet recommendation at end (too clean, too AI) 4-item bullet recommendation at end of any article
Ending with "consider your options carefully" or any variant of that
Starting a new paragraph with "Furthermore", "Additionally", "It's worth noting"
Perfectly symmetrical sections (every section same length = AI fingerprint)
--- END GOLD STANDARD --- --- END GOLD STANDARD ---
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